My Apologies (A Collaboration)

This is another collaboration with my very talented bestie Manessah B. of the blog: Couch Talks, Wisdom & A Cup of Joe.
Thanks for pushing me to write this 😛

MY APOLOGIES (A Collaboration)

I don’t
believe in disloyalty.
Won’t turn my back on friends who’ve been loyal
to me.

And I
I’m no fan of pretending —
Acting like I care for people I’m not

my sin
of keeping promises made.
When I give my word, that’s a debt that will
be paid.

I will
For my consistent actions
and giving you love you never have to

you feel
that my thoughts are too intense
and the truths I try to explain are just

I guess
I’m wrong
To build a fence ‘round my dreams
because you never miss a chance to rip
their seams.

Yes I’m
for the distance I create
when I see you don’t really care about
my state.

Please show
I don’t see feelings as toys.
People are not Legos I build up and

Oh friend,
my trying to see the best
in situations that appear to be
a mess.

that you
never gave yourself a chance
to know me better. Instead, you judged at
first glance.

I don’t
in tossing people to curbs
when I get what I want and their purpose
is served.

So, please,
my sincerest apologies…

For being a human that possesses a heart.

Manessah B. – Zeina A.G.

23 Comments Add yours

  1. Muntazir says:

    Wow, this is amazing. You both are highly talented, mashallah. Stay blessed.

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    1. Thank you! So happy you liked it♥


      1. Muntazir says:

        Most welcome. Jazakallah Khair

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  2. Jokerswild says:

    This was so beautiful, and something that was perfectly done by two lovely ladies with beautiful hearts❤️. How the verses just flowed together was simply awesome, this poem was marvelous!🌹🌹

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    1. Manessah is wonderful!!! There’s so much depth and emotion in her writing. She never fails to amaze me especially when I’m stuck. Our writing always blends in a surprising way that I keep asking her to get out of my head!!!!!!!!!! 😛
      Thanks for reading ♥♥ Happy you liked it 😀

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        Yes, she is a superb writer that writes from her heart just like you and that’s exactly why this collaboration meshed so well. You two did a beautiful job and made lovely work🌹❤️

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      2. Thank you!! Manessah always gives me the motivation I need when I’m hesitating to write stuff that scare me.
        Small example…I proposed the idea of the short story “I’m Still Here” to her in October and she thought I should totally write it….Look how far it has come! ♥
        So blessed to have her support & the support of this positive community. xoxoxo Great friends always push you in the right direction.

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      3. Jokerswild says:

        Very true and she is a very motivating person, you can’t help but love how inspiring she is.🌹❤️

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    2. Isn’t Manessah great in rhyming though? ♥♥ That’s actually my favorite part about all this!!

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        She is an awesome writer with the ability to bring readers in with her lovely flowing words.🌹

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Jokerswild says:

        😊. Yes! And you are awesome too, and you can agree with that!😉

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      1. Sakshi says:

        My pleasure

        Liked by 1 person

  3. As I’m sure you’ve read the comment I left on Manessah B’s blog.

    Both of you are highly talented and such gifted writers.

    The connection you both bring into this writing is masterfully deep and beautifully well expressed. 🙂

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    1. Yes I read your comment on Manessah’s blog 😀
      Thank you so much for visiting my blog….so glad you liked the poem.
      Manessah’s writing is always deep and emotional. It was a great pleasure writing with her 😀

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      1. You are welcome my friend. 🙂

        Well, they say when to minds connect – the third mind unleashes the emotions and truth that reflect on the world around us.


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