They left

They left this world with their eyes closed,
And opened them in a serene place.

A place where they could watch us grow,
And send us subtle signs when life becomes hard to bare.


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  1. Loved it, specially the first two lines.. God bless.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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    1. Thank you😊☺

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      1. Pleasure, it was.. thanks to you.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜„πŸ’•πŸ˜‡

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  2. Loved this poem…and my favorite poem of today.

    So true…and I feel like our loved one’s miss us and love us and are watching over us.

    I know that the ones who love us will miss us

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    1. That made me tear up πŸ˜€ Thank you for your beautiful words and the video. All so so so true!

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      1. You are welcome. πŸ™‚

        Wise and honest felt words by: keanu reeves. He is the man. πŸ™‚

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      2. Yes he is! Thank you for this…I’ve been struggling and you’ve kept me active on WordPress. πŸ˜€

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      3. Really??? Awww…I feel so happy and honored that I have kept you active. πŸ™‚

        You are welcome.

        Question: Are you into electronic noise/industrial music? Are you similar with the genre?

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      4. I’m not familiar with the genre but I love music so feel free to share πŸ˜€

        Thank you πŸ˜€

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      5. Okay, Listen to Aphex Twin.

        Aphex Twin – T69 Collapse

        Let me know what you think of the song. πŸ™‚ I love electronic noise/Industrial music. πŸ™‚

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      6. I like it πŸ˜€ Never heard anything like this before.

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      7. Awesome. Glad you enjoyed the music.

        Here’s one that I think you might remember or not.

        Sneaker Pimps – 6 Underground – Official Video [HD]


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      8. Yesss I remember this πŸ˜€ Thanks for sharing!

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      9. You are welcome. That music is consider trip-hop. A combination of electronica/hip hop/break beat/soul/house/jazz/R&B/ambient/psychedelia/& lounge. All put into one. πŸ™‚ Well, the rest of the album gets a similar vibe and different styles. πŸ™‚

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      10. The video though is hard to watch.

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      11. My apologies. I should have picked a better video that isn’t too crazy, visual wise of course. Hope you enjoy the other video I send you you in the other reply. πŸ™‚

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      12. Yes, listening to it now πŸ˜€
        The video wasn’t a problem in the previous one..I didn’t watch all of it ….just heard the song πŸ˜€

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      13. Awesome! Hope you remember and like the song. πŸ™‚

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